13 JUN 2021.
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My comments on the draft video posted in YouTube:
13 June 2021. A concise vet educational video for hamster owners. This video is created by an intern with guidance from me (Dr Sing Kong Yuen). She is free to make mistakes as that is how she will learn better than being spoon-fed. Hence I had not edited her script before she created this video. My comments are: 1. All interns tend to go to exposition. It is important to think of a hook and then continue from there, otherwise, the video is just an ordinary dull power point lecture. 2. ERRORS: 2.1 incorrect link the credits: www.toapayohvets.com/videos.html with the "html" is erroneous. It should be https://www.toapayohvets.com/videos.htm 2.2 "abdominal tumour" was removed. It should be "abdominal SKIN tumour". 2.3. 1:08 - Image of condo where Mrs Johnson lived is actually image of Housing Board flats." 2.4. "tall, fair, lady" should be tall and fair lady. 2.5. HOOK in this video shows the SAME images as INTRODUCTION OF WHATSAPP message. it should have used the LATTER as hook instead. 3. The video footage on credits is much better than my previous ones as it is a video rather than slide presentation at the conclusion. 4. Do remember to use the "Hook" in next video production as video making is so much different from writing essays or expositions. 5. This video creation shows the importance of google docs in collaboration with me. If she had put up the script at google docs for me to read, she would not have erroneouly stated "abdominal tumour" was removed. It was an abdominal skin tumour. 6. UPDATED INFORMATION WILL BE AT: https://2010vets.blogspot.com/2021/05/3595-2-year-old-dwarf-hamster-has-itchy.html
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To re-make the video:
HOOK. Use this footage unless you have better ones.
Ms Thompson
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