Overall, it is a great work done by you as you manage to give a good narrative. Please add/delete the following

1. Insert the HOOK video. 2 songs WITHOUT THE SUBTITLES

at video timing 3:50 to 5:09

2. Insert the TITLE.
Getting to know a bit about the Peranakan culture

3. The conclusion is abrupt. Please add some footage eg.

Malacca is a very popular internatinal tourist destination.

This was a very well organised Convention in Malacca.

The performers were lively (insert images given below).

The baby-boomer audience danced to their hearts out and enjoyed every moment of the dinner and dances. (insert images below).

This 25th Convention showcased the rich heritage, culture and lifestyle of the Peranakans to outsiders. It was one of those rare dinner and dance occasions that will be remembered to the end of time for the participants.

Conclude with song "Burong Kaka" if possible.

4. Please get rid of the credits and start a new one.

Insert image for reading for few seconds

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After title, go to as what you had done as INTRODUCTION

Take out subtitles if possible. They obstruct the top view. Insert subtitles in a transistion slide or just at the commencement of the song.

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INTRODUCTION - Some scenes of Malacca, a tourist destination

25TH ANNIVERSARY - A JOYOUS OCCASIONS AND GREAT DANCERS
Guests are mainly older adults who grow up with the music. The baby boomer generation that appreciates the oldie music.

PERFORMERS ARE LIVELY AND LOVE SINGING AND DANCING TO THE MUSIC WITH THEIR HEARTS

VIDEOS IN THIS SEQUENCE

Malay song
3814 Burong kaka
3815 Burong kaka
3988

Transition

Baby boomer's beloved romantic songs of love

4018 Dancing lady
3819 I saw her standing there
3827 Fall in love with you by Cliff Richard